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Thumb Nail Story Board by ~Saint-Type-B:iconSaint-Type-B:

Categories Cartoons & Comics > Traditional Media > Cartoons > Drawings

©2009 ~Saint-Type-B
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Just a very quick storyboard sketch.

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~lawlessComics Feb 3, 2009, 9:42:47 PM
no serious complaints here. I read the page without any words so thumbs up to that. Seems a little much for one page though. This is prob more like 2 pages. it flows nicely one rec Im gonna say though is during the attack try and get more of their bodies in there rather than just a fist with a bottle in it make it a shadowy figure for more dramatic effect. Ideas for Panel shapes may seem obvious try and avoid symmetry in your panels. Make them more rectangle than squares. But yeah get to work on a finished version of page one as soon as you can this storyboard shows you know how to work the main ideas.

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~Saint-Type-B Feb 4, 2009, 3:14:06 AM
Yeah. This was not an outline of panel size or setup. Just a compressed thumbnail

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~lawlessComics Feb 4, 2009, 11:12:07 PM
awesome Im still waiting on that revised script bro

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